Heart Felt

The softest touch ever felt. 

An embrace leaving love, safety and comfort in its wake. 

Words were easy to speak. Time was endless. 

Different lives entwined into one seeking the common goal of happiness and success. 

Each heart with a different journey but in the end two will beat as one.

Reviews

[Shirlena]

So Nat are you presently available because if the right man sees this he's going to fall. YOu do know many poets fall for each other, that's been my experience so you keep writing all sultry like you're doing. I expect more books and poetry once you do...it will show a different slant to you I'm sure. Lovely sis.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Lol, yes I am currently available. But finding "the one" seems might become a long journey. Patience is the key, I keep telling myself that. But its easy to fall for a poet :)
Thank you so much girl. I appreciate your words so much!

[Shirlena]

Yes it really is...or to have them fall for you because you are a poet so do be patient because you're an attractive girl. You shouldn't have anything to be worried about.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you sis :)

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Stephen]

The souls become one dancing all the night alone in the dark room feeling n consuming the drops of gratifying love. All the composition of words are directly touched the heart with the scent of love. Love's a thing which always keep us sane but it's what that make us insane so, it does happen. Daily we got love cus, we are all surrounded by love so the hurt comes because heart hurts...but this poem's totally different because here lovers made their nights dancing all the night for long..till morn comes making the soul one ... they bodies collided bringing smiles on faces because it's called true love when lovers don't give or take pain but inhale and exhale the warmth of immortal love with happiness and that's all the poem says. I adore this poem.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)

[Stephen]

Ah! The pleasure's always mine reading your beautiful stuffs. Today, i'd like to read some more your coolio stuffs to make my day refresh ;)

[wordman]

I loved it time was endless two hearts entwined and now beat as one

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you :)

[wordman]

you are welcome,my pleasure

[Antoñyo]

Although I havent the time to read longer stories and books currently, fellow "bleeders" are always an intrigue and I'll make a mental note to return for the stories.

This piece in itself captures a favorite moment in time many can relate to.
Thanks for the share

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Well, one bleeder to another I appreciate you taking the time to read one of my pieces :)
read moreWell, one bleeder to another I appreciate you taking the time to read one of my pieces :)

Thank you so much for the positive feedback.

[Antoñyo]

Oh not a prob...I plan to!

[dakarai]

i really like your style. i like the way you break everything up into small stanzas. it controls the thought and the flow of the poem. great job.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you. I usually write stories. So writing poetry is a little new to me. I'm glad that you like it

[A. Amos]

Interesting work my friend

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thanks Amos! I was a little apprehensive about posting my poems but your positive words gave me the courage. This is my playground and I'm no longer afraid to play :-)

[A. Amos]

That's my gal and I also invite you to read my stuff, not hot as yours but just crazy writes:)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I've been reading your stuff and I have to say they are amazing. There is always depth and emotion behind your writing, I like that. I guess I write the hot stuff and you write the deep stuff ;-)

[A. Amos]

Well i have written some hot, it's my finished book just under going final editing:)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Oh really? Well you must tell me when its out because I'm definitely going to grab a copy