Longing

Longing

A Poem by Natalie Dieudonne

I long for the day my eyes fall upon yours, 

strangers in a room full of people yet I am all you see. 

The fear of how to approach me makes you motionless, 

but the greater fear of not having me makes you move forward. 

In an instant my heart recognizes you, 

it sees what it has longed for yet never obtained. 

But it fears what may come, because scars still remain. 

You whisper to me, 

I see your pain and I am here to take it away. 

Because just as your heart recognized mine, 

my heart does the same.

© 2014 Natalie Dieudonne


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Great poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very moving and beautiful write Natalie. It really connected with me and the way I sometimes view life as surreal and not always black and white, a very enjoyable read
anne


Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words.
anne p. murray- LadeeAnne

7 Years Ago

It was a pleasure to read your work Natalie
There is a lot of spirit in this poem. Beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much
when two hearts meet love is blind you enter in to one another
your souls make love solace you find

Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

That is so true. Well said :)
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ANM
This is what makes us human a connection of hearts... Well written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
ANM

7 Years Ago

You are welcome!
I can truly relate to this, Natalie...

You pen with heart!

Anyone who reads this piece will certainly feel the connection and yearning... it's what keeps us going.

Nicely done! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

Its the only way I know how to write :)

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
"You whisper to me,

I see your pain and I am here to take it away.

Because just as your heart recognized mine,

my heart does the same."

A splendid read and write...:).................


Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your positive feedback :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......................
but the greater fear of not having me makes you move forward.
Great write, fully succeeding in in expressing the feelings and the genuine concerns, can see came directly from heart, enjoyed

Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

Thanks Linda :)
Linda alexander

7 Years Ago

You most welcome my dear friend, take care
Nat this one is deep and beautiful, every word of yours show reflection of your beautiful soul. Thank you

Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

7 Years Ago

Thank you Amos :)
A. Amos

7 Years Ago

You're welcome my friend:)

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Added on February 25, 2014
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Natalie Dieudonne
Natalie Dieudonne

Miami, FL



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