Wrong From The Start

Wrong From The Start

A Poem by nattikur cullen
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Completely true. A small page or so of lyrics.

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Wrong From The Start

 

I’m broken hearted,

Sitting alone,

All my dignity

And courage gone.

 

I’ve got half a heart,

Now you’ve torn it in two.

You’ve taken the other half

Away with you.

 

‘cause everyone told me

It was wrong from the start.

I never believed it,

I gave you my heart.

And now you’ve proved

What they all said to me

Was true.

Now I hate you.

 

I told you I loved you,

And you said it too.

Was everything a lie,

Or was some of it the truth?

 

Did you get a kick

Out of seeing me hurt?

Seeing me lie crumpled

Down in the dirt?

 

‘cause everyone told me

It was wrong from the start.

I never believed it,

I gave you my heart.

And now you’ve proved

What they all said to me

Was true.

Now I hate you.

 

And I put so much effort,

And I wasted so much time,

Into helping our relationship.

Was that such a crime?

 

And it’s strange how you turned

From such a loving, caring guy

Into such a huge jerk.

I just wish you would die.

 

‘cause everyone told me

It was wrong from the start.

I never believed it,

I gave you my heart.

And now you’ve proved

What they all said to me

Was true.

Now I hate you.

 

Yeah, everyone told me

It was wrong from the start.

© 2009 nattikur cullen


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Bravo, bravo! It can be a really great song with the right melody.
"Now I hate you".
That's a bit much, no? From the rest of this piece, the tone is somewhat angry, but this line caught me off-guard.
Nevertheless, a very true and saddening work. Kudos to you!

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