Kashmir flood 2014

This was the first time in my life

"FLOODED KASHMIR", everything was on the edge of knife..

although i am sixteen , god has bestowed me my second life..

the encounter with water was devilish

water was tyrannous 

force was furious..

we had no hope to live 

and thought survivors t be few

FLOODED KASHMIR...

paradise  seemed to be lost lost lost

death toll was going up fast fast fast

we lost our brothers , sisters . parents and

family members...

Everyone has a loss be it a clerk or a boss

We faced such a disaster 

it was a punishment from the great master

its time to repent 

or else be ready for another punishment

WE CAN ONLY PRAY NOW GOD SAVE US SOMEHOW..

GUIDE THE KASHMIRS NOW....

Author's Note

I AM REALLY SORRY FOR WRITING LATE... THE REASON BEING THAT MY HOME PLACE I.E KASHMIR WAS HIT BY FLOODS AND WE HAD A NARROW ESCAPE.... THIS POEM DEALS WITH SOMETHING THAT I EXPERIENCED AND FELT ...

Reviews

[Amduscia]

Well written. I, too, view natural disasters, as punishments from God, in fact, I look upon EVERY disaster as a punishment from God, and try and accept it, as much as possible, regardless as to how horrible it may seem.

[Naysan arif]

Absolutely correct..:) this is ,what was the theme of my poem.. i am glad you got it... and experiencing such a disaster reminds us that still there is a lot more to do...:O