seeing is beleving

seeing is beleving

A Poem by Arianna

my eyes must be lying
beacuse you couldnt be
you wouldn't be
not to me anyway

it must be a trick
an illusion
that happens you know
sometimes

but they have
to be deceving me
projecting
false images

beacuse you wouldnt
beacuse you couldnt
do that to me
lie

i must be missing something
anything
cause seeing is beleving
but i dont belive

i dont belive you'd do this
lie
straight to my face
my eyes must deceve me

but they dont
they tell me truths
when im sourounded by lies
seeing is beleving

i couldnt belive youd do this
wouldnt.
now let me ask you
was it easy?

© 2010 Arianna


Author's Note

Arianna
ignore the grammer. belive me i know it sucks okay. just suck it up. all the words are readable. so dont have a hissy fit.

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Great poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


A strong poem. I like the feel and emotion. Sometime hard to believe when things happen. Last line made the poem complete. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think its great


Posted 13 Years Ago


Buon Lavoro

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is too much. It's really good. I like how denial and trust is portrayed. I've favourited it. Rated 100.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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