Lost in you.

Of men and of gods

the demons that stand behind the veil.

Assured of a beautiful lie

That an angel or savior is there for all.

I call forth into the deepest ocean.

Reach out to the vast space.

I cannot and will not find the ecstasy

neither in the sweetest melody 

nor in the greatest defeat.

I shall find only the place unknown

Hidden deep in the crevasses of a secluded heart.

Where I will drown in the amber of lights.

Dont stop me for I will lose myself.

Dont stop me for I will find me.

Stop me only if I go way into the darkness.

Where you wont dwell into my maze mind.

Author's Note

Be harsh, correct me.

Reviews

[Brokensoul]

I like your self assurance and the confidence the poet exudes. You know how you will be able to find yourself and you won't seek for anyone's help. When you are sad and sulk on your own, it's better to vent out your rage by scribbing your thoughts. and you never know how a good poem is written. More power to you!!

[New Theory]

Thanks for the review :). I am not sad but yes its true that I haven't found myself yet. I write to find myself and quiet frankly its the joy of story telling, I have always been the kind of person who likes telling stories. Writing is a way I record those weird ideas. Poetry isn't my forte but then there are those sleepless nights when the words rhyme on their own. This poem came to me on a night when I remember being extremely sad and confused and just venting it out.

Thanks a lot for reading it :)

[Brokensoul]

I do agree with what you just said.

[New Theory]

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[Vidya Bacchus]

Who could be harsh to you? I really like this.If we don't take a chance how will we reap the rewards right :)

[New Theory]

Thanks so much Vidya :) , Sorry I completely was engrossed in writing this new story.
Your reviews are always so nice. Yes its about taking chances and moving forward to discover your own self and hence find peace.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my friend.It is easy to be nice when you write so well :)

[Anita Singh]

Wow! I loved this! Knowing the consequences yet taking a chance in love.

[New Theory]

Sometimes a leap of faith is the best one can do. :)
Thanks for the review.

[lost girl]

There is no need to be harsh or to correct you...within your soul you already know the meaning...already have the passion...have answered the call...amazing lines like these only come from poets and survivors....Dont stop me for I will lose myself.
Dont stop me for I will find me.

[New Theory]

Thank you so much for the words of encouragement, You are so sweet and kind :)

[Angel M]

I really love how it's written also the depth of the message in the poem. I love how you delivered the message.

[New Theory]

Thank you so much :) .

[Fluffy Mamma]

I liked this poem. It seems the entity in the poem is a lost soul searching for something. Possibly himself? Either way, great work :)

[New Theory]

Thank you, so much. :)