You are back :)

You are back :)

A Story by New Theory
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Kristina is back from a long trip.

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Kristina  had just returned from her business trip. She was tired and sleepy but first she wanted to see her baby. Swetlana was only seven months old, fast asleep beside her father. Kristina went and lied beside her and the moment she did, Swetlana opened her eyes as if looking at her mother. She closed her eyes thinking it was a dream and a few moments later she opened them again, this time as if confirming that it's not.  Kristina lied beside her, seeing the reaction of her baby and knew that her baby also knew she was back, as the sweetest smile now adorned Swetlana's face.

© 2014 New Theory


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New Theory
Dedicated to the sweetest bond between a mom and her child.

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Quick, momentous take on a very cherishing moment. I must say I was expecting a time laps; she wakes up and sees that her baby is now all grown up. I'm glad you kept to the intimate moment expressed here, I believe it works very finely that way. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Tai :)



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Quick, momentous take on a very cherishing moment. I must say I was expecting a time laps; she wakes up and sees that her baby is now all grown up. I'm glad you kept to the intimate moment expressed here, I believe it works very finely that way. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Tai :)
Sweet and short, lovely :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Amal :)
Awww So Sweet! :D Definitely made me smile. It was a short and sweet video clip :) Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Mary :)
Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

You're Welcome!
Quite nicely phrased. Well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Neeraj :)
Sweet, sweet right! Beautiful. I have the same problem that KL pointed out. Hahaha! Great job with this! (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Madalyn :)
Sweet, full of love and emotions..
Precise and perfect writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ayushi :). Is there anything you want me to review, I would like to read your work.. read more
Ayushi

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome..
I would be glad if you'll read my work :)
nicely written
good short and sweet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Vaishnavi. :)
There is no love nor bond greater on this earth than that between a mother and child. You captured the essence of it, N.T.!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Science Lady :)
I like it, I'm not one for sappy stories and it was well done, I'm not the guy to have look at spelling mistakes, but the story line was nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ilerah :). You can check out my other stories they are science fiction, fantasy :)
Ilerah

9 Years Ago

I love Fantasy, i will
New Theory

9 Years Ago

:) I hope you enjoy.
This was a very nice story to see just before mother's Day. Not one, but I think it captures the spirit of the holiday

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

9 Years Ago

Thank you Speedy Hobbit. It's dedicated for my mother :)

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