You are back :)

You are back :)

A Story by New Theory
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Kristina is back from a long trip.

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Kristina  had just returned from her business trip. She was tired and sleepy but first she wanted to see her baby. Swetlana was only seven months old, fast asleep beside her father. Kristina went and lied beside her and the moment she did, Swetlana opened her eyes as if looking at her mother. She closed her eyes thinking it was a dream and a few moments later she opened them again, this time as if confirming that it's not.  Kristina lied beside her, seeing the reaction of her baby and knew that her baby also knew she was back, as the sweetest smile now adorned Swetlana's face.

© 2014 New Theory


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New Theory
Dedicated to the sweetest bond between a mom and her child.

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Quick, momentous take on a very cherishing moment. I must say I was expecting a time laps; she wakes up and sees that her baby is now all grown up. I'm glad you kept to the intimate moment expressed here, I believe it works very finely that way. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

10 Years Ago

Thank you Tai :)



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This is very sweet. In this instance, you want to use lay versus lied. It is common to confuse when to use lay and lied
Maybe this will help -- pilfered off the internet grammar girl -- an example of when to use which word.
“She lied when she said she lay down and laid the book beside her"


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

10 Years Ago

Thank you KLGoode, that's a silly mistake which I always do. I will edit it asap and the example can.. read more
Ilerah

10 Years Ago

I always make silly mistakes like that too when i write, and can you please look at my stuff, if you.. read more
This is truly lovely Theory.There is no deeper bond I think than between a mother and her child.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Very beautiful! Not what I expected when I saw the title, but this is an incredibly beautiful story that captures the beauty of something so small in life. Well done sir!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New Theory

10 Years Ago

Thank you Miles :). You have always been very encouraging :)

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Added on May 9, 2014
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