MOMENTO-MOMENT

Spanish with english translation by author

Momento  

Enterrada en el pasado ;

caminando del Este al Oeste ,

de la montaña al mar ,

avanzando, sollozando ,

llegando al momento.

Sobre la mesa un pañuelo ,

hierba y vino , una rosa…….

surgiendo de aquel pasada

aire fresco , inspiración …….tranquilidad.

Moment

Buried in the past,

walking from East to West ,

from the mountains to the sea ,

advancing , sobbing ;

arriving at the moment .

on the table a scarf ,

grass and wine ; a rose ……

surging up from that past ,

fresh air , inspiration  , 

…….tranquility.

                                                                  

    

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

That's soft and very pleasant. Seemed, you just captured the realism - the real nice moments of your very life in words that how it supposed to cross your path & the winds blew you - gently drifted you - to another streamline of your destiny. Sounds fascinating. Nice shot. Short, simple & very "tranquil" poetry it is!

[Sari Segale]

Thanks dear Adam.

[Tomoe Tellez]

Great poem, the flow and words were lovely.

[Sari Segale]

¡Muchas gracias Alondra!

[Sari Segale]

Thank you dear Nisreenaa for a loving review.
Thank you Coyote,my pleasure to share with you.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words took the reader with the writer. Traveling and finding peace in the end. I like the gentle tone leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sari Segale]

Thank you for your kind review and for reading and understanding.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[B]

We got few moments
so precious

I say lets always make them count

Love your style
So much seclusion and self searching in your words

Lovely
muy hermoso

[Sari Segale]

Thanks so much for your kind words¡