Other Girls Vs. Me

My take on what goes on in other girls' minds.

hey haley baby

how you been doin' lately?

man you know me homie

just chillin, writin daily

dateless, lateness on the delay

but hey it's all okay

writin daily?

haley, that's crazy

yeah i guess i'm crazy

in a daze, a frenzy

but maybe with my words,

one day i'll be ridin in a benzy

girl i know you like them intellectuals

but why not get a little sexual?

forget the mental,

you're a real b***h when you're menstrual

i'm even bitchier on this instrumental

but fo realz girl,

why don't you get a boy who cuts deals

and have you spinnin in wheels

faster than you can write with that pen?

boys? no sorry, i prefer men

again and again you criticize my pen

men? girl you better get used to it

or you'll end up a shoe in

i'll put my shoe in that door

i don't wanna hear anymore

boo you w***e,

well i don't wanna hear anymore

of your lyricism, cynicism bullshit

cuz your s**t's weak

weak does not define me

so those boys cannot confine me

define me?

confine me?

conniving a*s trick,

you make me sick,

i ain't weak, see

my boy don't tie me down

i'm the queen b***h in charge,

i sport my crown

trick? what magician do you see here

my dear? do you fear that

my words are too real and that

yours are a means of defense?

cuz no offense you know, i'm just keepin it real

that's why you ain't got a boy

all you can do is toy

with the mind, and them boys stay

confined in confusion

movin on to the next best thing

and my phone just happen to ring, i'm that thing

toy with? no i stimulate the mind

make em think, i don't try to confine em

cage em, aid em, and they aid me

i am selective, expective,

i gotta find the right one, hon

i'd rather be able to stimulate than to

be the one to which they masturbate

degrade myself, i do not

you ain't stimulatin s**t

and i aint got time for this s**t

hit it and quit it, naw they don't do that to me

wait, new text, what?

baby it's over? please!

i tried, i loved you, i teased!

haley i need another dose of your lyricism please

Author's Note

Be as brutally honest as you need to be :)

Reviews

[Dionysus Cain]

i thought you were arguing with yourself, the devil and angel on each shoulder........putting in each is two cents... i liked it, it had some spunk , i know you can make this better , so do it, and make it perfect

[Ari]

The first half of this is absolutely amazing, and the wordplay is great. The second half starts to get on my nerves eventually, though. Not sure why or where the change is, but I hope that helps.

[Panthera Tigris]

i loved it!!! lol, hot s**t i loved the way it played out && it so true everything the poem said is the way girls basically talk,think about all the time .