A Poem by TQ

She was the first one who got on board!..





I am opening a new page
From all of the mess she left behind
A new me I hope to find

She ripped my heart apart
I have only one word
Its I wont ever trust her again
I don’t even think of her! Shame

She filled my heart with lies
Fire that never dies
Wings that never flies
Took Away My life

Should I forgive her after what she has done?

I’m closing my eyes
Getting over my old life
Over a glance
It’s like having a dance

My madness to you is like a fire deep in the ocean
One day you will hear an explosion
That’s when I will be starting a erosion

You cant take away my smile
Fake always dies
So as our relationship

I said that this will last forever
If it’s fake I say NEVER!
I don’t think that you are a believer...
You treated your life as a heater

After all you have done to me
I’m glad that I’m here to see
Do you have an Idea of what do I feel?
Shame is what you should feel…

I won’t waste any more words on you
I will turn my head and forget about you
The same thing you did to me
You’re so WANNA BE!

Long good bye The traitor I used to love The first one who got on board!



Written by...    

                    Tariq Suhail Al-Shaibani

                          (¯`·._.·[ TQ ]·._.·´¯)

© 2008 TQ

Author's Note

Now Months later, I look back and laugh of what before I thought that it is my life..

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wow this is filled with so much emotion. I get what you are sayimg in this. You know i've gpne through lots of breakups in my life time.... Excellent

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Muscat, Oman

My name is Tariq Suhail I'm 14 years old I live in Oman ! I study an American Education Poetry writing is my Hobey :) more..