JUDA’s CHRIST / JUDA’s Advocate

JUDA’s CHRIST / JUDA’s Advocate

A Poem by nishantshah2381

The Words of this holy world, 
Subterfuged his eyes and soul. 
Day by day they tore him apart,
With his innocence they  played.

When the tides were going his way,
With this girth his mind frayed,
When delusions unmasked themsleves,
Found out he had fallen a prey.

Now His holy shrine started to refrabricate,
Like a needless creature he was renunciated. 
Hypocrisy of His Highness kept him captivated,
Respecting His orders he vanished far away.

But everything changed with time,
Embarking on new dawn he preached.
The Prophecies Of His Highness,
With goodwill and peace.

But in that holy world, 
His Unholiness had Some words to say,
“Jude’s was the Daemon ,
Draped in the flesh of man.”

But with no knowledge of the words of His Highness,
Scripted his encounters with Mary, John and HIGHNESS.
Juda’s Testaments is what the world knows today,
Wrote all the truth which he knew till that day.   

The candour which Jude’s posseessed,
Which HIs Highness had lost. 
Somwhere in the flare,
This is the only reason,
“Jude’s” and not the “Jesus” 
Is the Immortal man. 

© 2011 nishantshah2381


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I was impressed while reading this poem then when I read the ending it like seriously blew me away.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well penned! The ending is very powerful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay you have a few grammar issues besides the words I don't understand but, other then that you did a great job. I love font even though it may be a little too small but the idea for this writing is creative and a little grammar issues too. Anyway marvelous job all in all making me think. So excellent work and keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago


An excellent thought provoking piece

Posted 13 Years Ago


It took me a while to get to this, but I'm glad I did. The act of the church banning the book is treacherous to say the least, and if we take it as a condemning act, then Christianity as a whole would fail -- or rather, as you pointed out in your poem, carry on with a different saviour. It was hypocritical for Jesus to forgive all but one, that I cannot disagree with, but, of course, one sacrifice may have been necessary to illustrate that everything cannot be forgiven for those who practice Christianity. Your poem brings about some brilliant points, and with those points potentially reshapes the world we know today. To say the least, the thoughts were brilliant. I do wish that it was more of a poem, possibly with more flow or rhythm, as it stands it seems to be more of a statement, but beyond that very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A thought provoking piece indeed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well penned thoughts..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


Something won't ever be understood. The life and death of Jesus got so twisted throughout the history of time. I hope sometime there was a Jesus. Someone who took away all all sins. Juda is a open question. I like the logic in your words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 23, 2011
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Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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