Crush

I'm too young for romance
But yet it makes its advance
I'm too young to wait for princes
Yet I day dream at all my chances

Fairy Tales are not real
But their truth has much appeal
The world is cold, cruel and evil
But there's happiness 'neath that anvil

Crushes seem weak nonsense
Love sparks hope and persistence
I'm to young for sparking love
But crushing descends like a white dove

I hope he notices
When I'm a true poetess
I give silent dodging glances
And look away at all my chances

It's fleeting, mysterious
Wondrous and delirious
Many wise have pondered it's glory
And what makes it come down lowly  

Years have been spent trying
To figure out the lying
Emotions that tell you nonsense
Suffocates, and makes you so tense

I'm too young for this
But yet it leads to my bliss
I marvel as it to me comes
Leading the world with steady drums

It passes age to age
A romance playing on stage
It starts small, but now is large
And soon enough it will be in charge

I'm too young for romance
But yet it makes its advance
I'm too young to wait for princes
Yet I day dream at all my chances

Author's Note

Sorry for all the mistakes, I have a hard time getting poems to rhyme, but I like them more if they do. Keep in mind that I'm 13. Does any one know how to get the top of the image to show?

Reviews

[Lilly]

"It's fleeting, mysterious
Wondrous and delirious"

I really liked those lines - true, lovely description of a 'crush.'
Nice poem :)

[LunarSong]

Thank you!

[Lilly]

You're welcome :)

[Renny]

cool write

[LunarSong]

Thanks... though I did write it now two years ago, and haven't gotten better :)

[Renny]

This is very encouraging if you can write this at 13 then your defo gon be an Icon a t 25

[Megara]

familiar feeling!love the poem!

[LunarSong]

Thanks :)

[RachelReaper]

as for the image, I would just pick a different one but similar to the one you already picked, as for the poem, I know the feeling. I'm 14, but man... it hits hard, doesn't it?

[Starscraper]

Oh my heck I LOVE this! And I definitely think that it is true!

[LunarSong]

Wow, every time I get a review on this I remember, oh yeah, I wrote this. I can't believe it was really close to two years ago. Glad you like it, I guess.

[Starscraper]

Wow that was a long time ago! I still love it though. You are AWESOME!

[LunarSong]

Thanks, (blush)

[Starscraper]

You're welcome!

[Wolfwind]

This is a fantastic work of poetry! It takes young romance and views it with common sense, something so few have these days. This piece inspires strength, patience and continues to pulse outward with hope for the future when romance is something that is a viable option.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I hope he notices
When I'm a true poetess

- so sweet, I wish I had known a girl like you when I was your age :)

[Alana McGuire]

This really captivated me. Thank you for a lovely write :)

[Renny]

I swear this is awesome. You know how much difficult it is to write a rhyme. If you keep working hard at this Your sure to get a place at the Top. Grest work My Dear!