Would You Still Love Me?

...Yeah

If I was beautiful, would you still look at me or no?

If I had no heart, would we still kiss under the stars?

If I suddenly died, would you really actually cry?

Or would you, stand at my grave and lie?

If the world started to end, would you take me by the hand,
and take me to our secret castle in the sky?

Or would you stand there and watch me wither and die?

If I was never born, would you still love me?

Author's Note

Feeling let down/depressed/pissed....

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

That was a really cute, but sweet poem. You did a great job. There were good universal questions within it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of questions in your poem. I believe being young and filled with too much energy make you crazy. Life is a test to become stronger and try to hold on to our sanity. I believe everybody had a purpose. You are needed and you would leave emptiness if you were gone for many people. Took me many years to learn. Say nothing negative and try to be kind. Love and friendship will come. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[^JAMMIN' BANANAS^ >.<]

jw..... how could u still love somebody if they were never born?

poem*

short but yet long. if your mind works like mine, then this poem just took you through a journey. i like this po

[Raven Starhawk]

In the world of love and romance there is great heartbreak that threatens us all. Weird how the ones we love the most seem to be the ones who hurt us the worst.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful sweet romantic poem:)