It's So Dark (Please Stop)

It's So Dark (Please Stop)

A Poem by J. R.

One of these days I'll write a happy poem, someday. I hope it flows alright.

I'm trying to figure out what is it that I've done
I wonder who's gone and spoiled all our fun

I know there's something wrong
But I'm unsure of what it is
And I just wish we'd move along

But you're about to do something to me
Somebody cut the lights and I can't see

I don't know who's responsible
But I do know that voice
So I know who it could be

Please get that gun away from me
I know you're angry and I've done you wrong
But please, it doesn't have to be this way

Please stop
Oh please stop

I know you want to put me in my place
But please get that gun out of my face
I wish you'd just tell me what to do
I'll do anything you say
Just please put that thing away

Please stop
Oh please stop

© 2010 J. R.

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I love it, such meaning in the words.

Posted 12 Years Ago

ohh geez.. damn that was intense... but good... i liked it... keep it up :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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2 Reviews
Added on August 16, 2010
Last Updated on September 16, 2010
Tags: gun, please, stop, threaten, fear, violence, anger, remorse, away, dark


J. R.
J. R.

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