Airplane Back to London (Stranded)

Airplane Back to London (Stranded)

A Poem by J. R.
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About being stuck in a strange place.

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Airplane back to London took off without us
We're just watching it flying
We don't have any more money
And we may never see home again

Just got kicked out of our apartment
Now we're officially homeless
Don't know anyone in this country
And we may never see home again

© 2010 J. R.


Author's Note

J. R.
This one doesn't rhyme.

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This felt unfinished. I wanted like one more stanza to tie everything together. I was left wanting more, which is a good thing in that I enjoyed it so much I didnt want it to end, but bad because, well I wanted more!! haha. Nice write. Thanks for sharing it. All the best.
J

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This felt unfinished. I wanted like one more stanza to tie everything together. I was left wanting more, which is a good thing in that I enjoyed it so much I didnt want it to end, but bad because, well I wanted more!! haha. Nice write. Thanks for sharing it. All the best.
J

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not rhyming periodically is a great way to add changes. (: Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2010
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