Crumb on Her Table

I think this is very weird poem with long sentences..I should have named it The 'OUS' Love Poem' since all sentences end with the same words 'OUS'.lol...i intentionally wrote it this way..

She casts wild glances even though her actions are mysterious

I’m secure in my pride and I’m not nefarious

Raving beauty drives me mad and my thoughts aren’t perspicacious

Sudden emotion bursts inside my heart and I become oblivious

I’m drown into her spell and it is certainly ominous

I’m disconnected from my intellect and my state is now delirious

She’s generous and accepts advances that are amorous

My unconditional love is not entirely salacious

Moral compass is what she lost, she’s promiscuous!

Hit me, slap me, stab me, I can take it, I’m magnanimous

But don’t kiss me without love, I’ll find that act ferocious

Wish I could anchor my heart to her, but she’s treacherous

I love her with all my heart and she thinks it’s hilarious

She corrupts my heart that I couldn’t ever be chivalrous

She colors my life with chaos of trouble, so I have to be  meticulous

Now lost my self-esteem and dictates of my conscience are preposterous

Her love is burial ground of my dignity and I find this rather curious

This disease of mine is beyond healing and it has now become  insidious

She treats me like crumb on her table, but I would still be obsequious

 

nyi

( 31.5.2010 )

Reviews

[J.M. Barrett]

I didn't even know there were that many 'ous' words!!

Definitely like this poem, it has a sadomasochist feel to it.

"Her love is burial ground of my dignity and I find this rather curious"
Great line!!

"She treats me like crumb on her table, but I would still be obsequious"
And I love how you wrapped it up.

Great job!! :]