Numb

Wondering I could ever be sober

Intoxicated by your beauty and charms

A touch of life just slipping away

Never knew loving you could be clinical

 

Without you my dreams are scattered like broken glass

Reality becomes fictitious by your simple smile

My life is now redundant like an old tool

For the meaning of happiness is being near to you

 

When you left you gave birth to this numbness

Inside my chest and nothing can excite me since

Deprived of your love seems famine to me

Waiting for you to spark my days again

 

Nyi

2.5.2012

Reviews

[chirag jain]

loved it..feelings nicely described in words

[Coyote Poetry]

'My life is now redundant like an old tool
For the meaning of happiness is being near to you"
When we lose someone we need. Can make us numb and sad. Great description in the poem create a vision of loneliness and need. A excellent poem.
Coyote