Super Facial

I feel you as if our souls are attached

Emotions run deep shaking our existence

Puzzles about u are rich with reasons

Though time is needed to vanquish the doubts

 

You may be what your past has made you

But terror creeps inside me when you are far away

Wouldn't it be lovely if we can shape the future

By becoming the shelter of each others  past?

 

Perhaps the world is not beautiful enough

To understand and make you feel secure

Are you tired of finding it in the nature?

Would you be kind enough to search for it in me?

 

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

And I find you gorgeous with your childish acts

Unknown identity of you melts with your care for me

So can't I just say I'm not super facial for now?

 

Nyi

8.5.2012

 

Author's Note

simple and dialogue like write. This can be a little bit 'off the map' for some people.Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
And I find you gorgeous with your childish acts"
Nice flow of thoughts and I like the ending. A beautiful poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Whiskurz]

I liked this.....A really well written piece.....Whisk