Some Snow Would be Nice

Boston

no matter which direction 

i travel

to go home

my friends always call it 

"coming 

down"

as if to them

i am eternally superior

for having escaped

(a classic Freudian

Slip)

i wish they knew

how wrong they are

-�"

Author's Note

Title blatantly stolen from Augustana's "Boston"

Reviews

[Entropy of the mind]

Love this, Its very brilliant actually, especially the lines
"my friends always call it /"coming down"/as if to them/i am eternally superior/for having escaped"
I enjoy your work a lot, so keep it up :)

[Mother Maggie]

Your elegant simplicity mesmerizes me. Bravo, Oceana.

[Emily Rose]

It's a rather fabulous poem (also that is a fabulous song). From what I've read you are very good at capturing big things in a few phrases and words. It's like a gust of wind.

[Oceana]

Most played on my iPod. I'm so possessive of it. It's one of those things I love so much I honestly doubt other people when they tell me they love it ("but no, you can't, it's MY SONG"). Haha, thank you so much for your kind review :)

[Angi]

Geography has no bearing on, 'The Great Escape.' That comes wholly from inside. I love your work, Oceana. So much in few words.

[Oceana]

I agree. Your review made me think of how my best friend moved away when we were in the 8th grade, mostly to escape bullies. I wish I could've found a way to tell her she could move to Australia and still not find the happiness she was seeking... it had to come from inside of her. But, I digress.

Thank you for your review. I truly haven't been nearly as happy as I was in Boston since I left. I pray I some day get the opportunity to move back permanently.
Thank you for your review, as always :)