I Dream Of You

I Dream Of You

A Poem by iron_rose
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Long distance relationships are tough. :/

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I picture skies

of orange glow

With burning clouds

that drift and flow

Over flaming waters

ever silent and low

In sunset overdose

I dream of you

 

I feel the push

of the ocean breeze

And the waters crash

part at my feet

I look at the waves

and the song repeats

In lonely sand castles

I dream of you

 

I hit top speed

as I run down hill

The rain falls down

and i stand still

I’m soaked with your presence

and my heart is filled

And then I overflow

I dream of you

 

I dream of your hand

making love with mine

You kiss my lips

and stop the flow of time

 

Your ember fingers

They melt my skin

I dive into you

though I cannot swim

 

Then you lay me down

on cold naked steel

Nothing compares

to what i now feel

 

A million pleasures

knowing that you’re near

But then I wake up alone

and I shed a tear

 

I grab your letter

and read the last line

And then I whisper "I love you too"

and cry one more time

 

In unforgiving loneliness

this is all I can do

I close my eyes

and I dream of you

 


© 2020 iron_rose


Author's Note

iron_rose
i had no time to clean this up, too lazy to capitalize the I's lol

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Wow. Its so heartbreaking but yet really beautifully written and thought out. And id agree long distance relationships are hard...with words unsaid and thought unspoken. Absolutely amazing as always.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Oh wow, this was so beautiful.
I honestly think this is the best of your works (of what I've read, at least).
It truly is amazing. I found so many verses to be wonderful, that I don't think I can tell you a favourite. So, I'll put a couple :)
"the rain falls down
and i stand still
i'm soaked with your presence"
and
"i dream of your hand
making love with mine".
I think this one is much more different than the others, it's not all that cheesy ;)
I'm adding this to my library :D
Cheers! And great job

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Posted 12 Years Ago


you're really a good writer
=]
thanks for the thoughts..

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 24, 2012
Last Updated on November 21, 2020
Tags: love, dream, long distance relationships, sad

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iron_rose
iron_rose

Cebu, Philippines



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