the girl on the other side of the world

the girl on the other side of the world

A Poem by iron_rose
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a poem i wrote about a friend i met online. :) it took me a while to finish it. lol hope she likes it. lol

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as my sun conquers 
her moonbeams gleam
i walk under the blue
she's on deep purple dreams

and as her curtains fall
mine are just being raised
as she says her bedtime prayers
i sing my morning praise

her "hello" breaks my morning
her "smile" greets my day
i feel the warmth of her being
from half the world away

i eagerly say "hi"
ask if her day was well
then we pour a hundred LMAOs
and a thousand LOLs

it's funny how we just met
yet we talk like we're best friends
i love how she opens me up
with every note she sends

i'll never forget the extacy
of when i first saw her face
my rhymes they grew wings
and my heart joined a race

i love how her eyes dance
in her every burst of laughter
i love the glow of moonlight
in her strokes of red and amber

the subtle beauty of her kindness
warmer than any morning coffee cup
it draws me in much deeper
deep enough to fall in love

i guess fate has a way of saying
the best things in life are free
for somewhere under the stars
a lovely girl smiles for me

so i guess all that's left to know
with all the words that went and came
on the other side of the world
would she ever feel the same?

© 2011 iron_rose


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i like it,,it seems that its related to my MERE I..have you read it,haven't you?

Posted 12 Years Ago


..i liked it ..
...real emotions came to life again

Posted 12 Years Ago


hi,
beautiful :D
"it's funny how we just met
yet we talk like we're best friends
i love how she opens me up
with every note she sends"
I can really relate to this stanza :D
absolutely love it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


That girl is really lucky... and the poem flows great......
I just want to ask too. at the 6th stanza....extacy or ecstasy???
^^,

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww...she is one lucky girl!!! This is a beautiful poem! You choose your words well! Your love poems are just amazing! This could also be an awesome song!!;.)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! this was absolutely amazing! I loved every word of it (: The scheme of it all and just everything about it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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