Lullaby

Again, this is a song i'm working on, i'll be posting the link to the song here after i record it. ^^

 

Baby lie down and I’ll dim the lights

Just rest your head and close your eyes

And breathe easy, you can breathe easy

 

Settle down in my embrace

Come a little closer lemme kiss your face

So beautiful, you’re so beautiful

 

I hear you breathe and it makes me smile

I listen to your heart as it beats with mine

As i sing for you, I sing for you

 

You turn aside and I stroke your hair

I close my eyes and then I whisper a prayer

That you may never leave my side

God let this be a never ending night

 

I will sing a lullaby

All you have to do is close your eyes

And baby just dream away

 

And when it gets dark and you feel cold

I’ll take you in my arms and hold you close

I’ll be your hide away

 

I’ll tuck you in

And get you through the night

With this lullaby

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Aleyah]

I love this because your words break through in such a delicate manner; the change in the font size somehow helps this become more expressive. It flows so well, the subject doesn't change but the words do, so the transitions are fantastic. Overall, this is a really sweet poem, and you know that xD But I really like it, a lot. My favorite thing is that you seem to repeat things, but not in an annoying way; it's in a soothing manner, so it sounds calming and serene. Amazing job (:

[Kate Hunter]

I can definitely see this as a song. I may end up humming some random tune to it later today. Well done. It was sweet. Keep it up!
^_^

[Desmund Tiny]

so beautiful.....this poem is so sweet..... ^^, great write.....

[~Blue Fantasy~]

So beautiful! You are such a good writer! I love it!! :))

[Kesha]

Awww!! ^-^ that was absolutely amazing! I loved the flow of it and the meaning behind each and every word! You truly are a wonderful writer! :) All I can say is that is one lucky girl! :)