A Poem by iron_rose

Again, this is a song i'm working on, i'll be posting the link to the song here after i record it. ^^



Baby lie down and I’ll dim the lights

Just rest your head and close your eyes

And breathe easy, you can breathe easy


Settle down in my embrace

Come a little closer lemme kiss your face

So beautiful, you’re so beautiful


I hear you breathe and it makes me smile

I listen to your heart as it beats with mine

As i sing for you, I sing for you


You turn aside and I stroke your hair

I close my eyes and then I whisper a prayer

That you may never leave my side

God let this be a never ending night


I will sing a lullaby

All you have to do is close your eyes

And baby just dream away


And when it gets dark and you feel cold

I’ll take you in my arms and hold you close

I’ll be your hide away


I’ll tuck you in

And get you through the night

With this lullaby


© 2011 iron_rose

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I love this because your words break through in such a delicate manner; the change in the font size somehow helps this become more expressive. It flows so well, the subject doesn't change but the words do, so the transitions are fantastic. Overall, this is a really sweet poem, and you know that xD But I really like it, a lot. My favorite thing is that you seem to repeat things, but not in an annoying way; it's in a soothing manner, so it sounds calming and serene. Amazing job (:

Posted 12 Years Ago

I can definitely see this as a song. I may end up humming some random tune to it later today. Well done. It was sweet. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago

so beautiful.....this poem is so sweet..... ^^, great write.....

Posted 12 Years Ago

So beautiful! You are such a good writer! I love it!! :))

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww!! ^-^ that was absolutely amazing! I loved the flow of it and the meaning behind each and every word! You truly are a wonderful writer! :) All I can say is that is one lucky girl! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on September 15, 2011
Last Updated on September 15, 2011



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