Triangular

Life in threat
Weakened state
Love my only escape
Engineered for life
Breath sustained for now
Suddenly thrown into a daze
Real from fake is lost inside
Heart clings for you, and her
Confusion seeps from every pore
Pain, not meant, but felt
Love for them
We, two of three
Fall together, but apart
Real from fake blend together
Pain, not meant, but felt

Author's Note

Created due to reading the Twilight series

Reviews

[Lee]

"Life in threat, Weakened state, Love my only escape..."
Great opening lines- found it very thought-provoking...

overall, really enjoyed reading - it has a nice smooth flow, your choice of words were spot on... and the use of repetition was a good choice. Great write. Nice job

[Chase]

Thank you very much! Word choice has always been my strong point, this is one of my favorites.