I feel your hurt & your pain.

I feel your hurt and your pain

by what you write and  I read

in your poems and stories.

I understand it's hard for you.

To open up and trust anyone

every again.

But if you keep attacking others

around you constantly.

Instead of opening the door of

kindness and trust again in your

own life.

You will constantly be pushing

away any goodness towards you.

And only darkness and badness

will come to you.

As you feel it already within your

heart and soul.

Let the light inside.

And feel the nice things for ones

around you.

Hugs...

Reviews

[Flowers of Eternity]

I was so touched by this poem Dawn! This is so true to life and I am pretty sure many can relate to it.
I for one have gone through this myself. It was a hard and dark road but as you wrote in the poem "let the light inside" and so I did.
I truly love this Dawn!
Wonderful Piece of Art!

[Onlyme]

Thank you sweetheart for your wonderful review. bless you. Dawn.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Dawn. Negative bring negative. Positive bring hope. A wonderful and hopeful write. Thank you you for sharing the amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Onlyme]

Thank you Coyote, Hope your well. Dawn

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Dawn and I am okay and I hope you are doing well. Enjoying October.

[Onlyme]

Not to bad thanks. October prefer dark nights and cuddled up on the sofa. 😀

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like October. Halloween for the children.

[Onlyme]

I bet they love it. Trick or Treat..