Bitter Sweet Memories

Bitter Sweet Memories

A Poem by wordman



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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...


© 2017 wordman

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Well be still my beating heart! This is so beautiful Ron. You DO have a way with words my friend. ~Sharon

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank`s sharon
Wow, this is such a touching write, very beautiful write.

Posted 12 Months Ago


 wordman

12 Months Ago

thank you for reading
This is such a lovely write, ever so romantic as well, very nicely expressed.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you again
'Bitter Sweet Memories'
wordman,
Very meaningful as this flows in rhythm and honesty.
Nature holds something understandable to the rise and fall in the seasons of out lives.
This poem shows the bright life of bloom and the slow fading and pulling back.
Life is like that too with changes and seasons.
Bless you and I like your honest style.
Kathy

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you kathy,always appreciate your reviews
Kathy Van Kurin

2 Years Ago

Your welcome Ron and I appreciate you and your terrific and uplifting writing!
Blessings, as.. read more
Fabulous poetry! Indeed are memories the most friendly for. I hope she learns to Cherish her rosy soul soon;)

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
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Rye
...so lovely as you await for her to open with sincerity and love. Such wonderful sentiments

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Rye

2 Years Ago

you're welcome
Amazing poem. We all have bittersweet memories. I use to love and hate my father because he’d come home drunk and beat my mom but I still loved him.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

sorry you had to go through that,thank you for the comment
JungLee

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I still love him though.
 wordman

2 Years Ago

of course you do,sometimes we let alcohol run our lives
Beautiful empathy.
Brought a stinging to my eyes, trailed off in thought and blinked it quickly away.
Thank you

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading
This is a great poem and inspiring too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,,will return the favor later,got to leave for work
i read this again i still love it it popped up agin randomly glad it did, beautiful music too well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you julie

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