Motivation for a great day ahead.

Motivation for a great day ahead.

A Poem by Onlyme

He sits at his office desk
and daydreams.
Even though he has a pile of work
in front of him to read and do.

He sits and thinks
of his yacht in
the harbour
close to his workplace.

The beautiful day ahead.
Sun shining and the birds
singing outdoors.
His wife's beautiful smile and
his children
laughing and giggling.
Their dog.
A golden labrador sunning herself
on the deck.

These wishes filled his vision.

He will make come true
this coming weekend.
God willing.

Quick as a flash.
He turns his mind
back to work.

With a grin on his face.
And a renewed vigour
in his work.
With his dream goal.
Placed positively inside his
head and heart.

On his yacht
with his wife and kids
and a family dog in tow.

Made his day more enjoyable
and bearable.
Smiles.

© 2019 Onlyme


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Sweet poem. Liked the simplicity but loved the piece. Very nice

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you Anjeline, glad you liked it. Dawn.
Anjeline

5 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Dawn,
I sit here wondering what to say in response to your poem. Now retired, I don't have to sit at a desk unless I want to. I no longer dream of such things . . . But I do ponder that it is sad that we often spend so much time in the future that the present becomes a nuisance, even a drudgery sometimes (this was much of my experience). The young man (It is how I see him) is full of desire. I do remember when I had laborious , mindless work, I would think of how my girl friend and I could spend the weekend. Or how my last batch of photos might turn out (I enjoyed photography).

On a more technical side . . . why are those middle lines not in italics? Or why is most lines in italics except for just a few? Just curious.

Does this young man believe he is truly working towards his imagined future? Or is he just playing head games to make his life more bearable? I am interested in the psychology behind this poem, the why we find ourselves drifting from the moment to imagine another. My own belief is that God would have us amazed at the moment we occupy (even the work we do), for he did say, "Let tomorrow take care of itself." I enjoyed thinking upon your poem. Hope I didn't get too esoteric.
Tom

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

HI Tom, Thank you for your very interesting thoughts and comments. I was playing around in general w.. read more

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Added on March 3, 2019
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Tags: family, trip, day out, yacht, sun, sea, dog, motivation

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme