Perfection went crazy...

Perfection went crazy...

A Poem by Onlyme

The garden is immaculate
the house is spotless and
everything has its place.

The children eat in the
garden shed sitting on
a chair.
And never no mess or
upset is spotted anywhere.

I sometimes feel so sorry
for the children.
As they really don't have
a happy life.

Everything is to perfection.
No mess, no laughter
no living is allowed in that house.

Perfection went crazy.

© 2019 Onlyme


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imperfectly beautiful. loved it

Posted 5 Years Ago


This does not sound at all like the house we raised our 3 daughters in. Good observation, Dawn.
T.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Sound like you raised your daughters the right way with love, enjoyment and fun. :)
kentuck14

5 Years Ago

Well ... we tried.
imperfection is perfection...and living is messy....let them be kids.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

So very true Jacob.

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Added on April 4, 2019
Last Updated on April 4, 2019
Tags: perfection, immaculate, children, no life, no joy, fun, laughter, living, clean, spotless, keeping up with the joneses

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme