Wow......

The sounds of her breathing

touch his heart and soul.

And tears began rolling down his face.

He thought he had lost her forever.

As she started to lose that blue shade from

her skin. And her rosy cheeks came back again

And she too cried.

She was only 18 months old.

And the paramedics came just in time to safe her life.

ps 

We take life for granted

but in an instants it can be taken

and gone for good.

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A touching moving poem and how life is restored, the scare of losing a precious little loved one, I know such anxious moments as a mother. You depicted it all awesomely. Kudos.

Pls pleez do review/ comment/ add your thoughts on my newest poem too

[Robert Trakofler]

WOW I think I would die if I lost my grandchildren my my recent was hospitalized twice right after birth and I was so helpless to do anything it was an eye opening experience for me too:( I am so happy for you Dawn!

[gram linski]

beautiful snap shot moment of a life changing event, we tend to forget about the frailty of Life until it's too late,great poem, Dawn, hope you are keeping well,

[Dave]

Indeed WOW!! So young and so precious to be taken away. I am so glad to read of the wonderful happy ending. We should all thank God for the work of paramedics in our communities.

Take care - Dave

[Onlyme]

Exactly Dave, i agree wholeheartedly with you. Dawn.

[Intothemilkyway]

Truly so beautiful, words that come from the heart. We sure do take it for granted that's why we need to live in every moment.

[Onlyme]

Thank you Intothemilkyway. so very true. best wishes Dawn.

[wordman]

life is precious,and we seem to take it for granted

[Onlyme]

That is so true Ron. thanks for your thoughts. Dawn.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[light and ashes]

I'm sure for a parent their heart stops in a moment like this......nicely conveyed

[R.E. Ray]

This one hit me hard, Dawn. I witnessed a similar incident with my son when he was 16 years old. So thankful for the paramedics and doctors who made it possible for him to be with us today. Yes, that's truly a "Wow"... as so succinctly captured in this poem. Sometimes it's the brevity that speaks as much as the words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is one time when Crying is good..wonderful miracle.
j.