First steps

First steps

A Poem by outspoken1234
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I actually wrote this from a child's point of view of their father

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You were there when I took my first breath 
My dad helped me take my first steps
You where my shoulder to cry on after ever heart break 
You'll always be my best friend 
Even in the future after your life's spent 
One thing you'll always be Is the world's best father 
Our lives are never farther then you make them 
At birth two lives entwined as two but one 
When I've tripped and fallen 
You will always be the one picking me up 
If I wanted to sing a song 
You would always join and sing along 
My first steps were embedded in sand 
Your last will fall next to mine 
Life's a book you have to write your own chapters 
For now I must close and end this one 
To only begin again 
Daddy you were there at my first steps 
You'll always forever be my best friend 
Until I see you at one of life's crazy bends I want to say 
I love you dad thanks for my first steps

© 2016 outspoken1234


Author's Note

outspoken1234
This is the perfect dad daughter relationship I took what I don't have and put it into what it should be

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I really enjoyed this. Thank you for writing it. Bravo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!

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I am 19 currently and love to write poetry it helps me think and clear my head and understand my emotions. I want my poetry to help others who might understand or are going through some of the things .. more..

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