Land of the free

Land of the free

A Poem by outspoken1234
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This is from a solider's point of view.

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I've put up with life
Sheltered everyone
Put up with abuse 
Have been sucked into my own mind 
I'm tired of being held back
I'm going to break free 
The chains are falling lose at my feet
Freedom comes with a price
I'm willing to make that sacrifice
Breaking through the bondage headed toward 
The land of the free
Life throws struggles at you 
Half the time you end up on the floor
Keeping you from reaching full potential 
Dragging around a ball and chain living half a life 
Realizing you are not some prisoner 
Finally standing up to fight 
Fighting for freedom, peace, happiness, or joy 
Got to fight protect them all in
The land of the free

© 2016 outspoken1234


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A heart-touching and inspiring poem. The biggest idols of sacrifice are soldiers- who give their today for our tomorrow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

8 Years Ago

My older brother inspired this poem. He talked a lot about his experiences and things just formed i.. read more
Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)

8 Years Ago

Most of the beautiful things one pens down draw inspiration from real life, do they not?
outspoken1234

8 Years Ago

yes it is a beautiful thing it captures all the emotion and struggle and helps others understand

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Added on April 9, 2016
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I am 19 currently and love to write poetry it helps me think and clear my head and understand my emotions. I want my poetry to help others who might understand or are going through some of the things .. more..

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