Faeries

My poem is written in the structure of Bi~Trillets... Designed by Richard Jenkins ... a fun and wonderful way to put a poem together. My first try at this.

✨ FAERIES ✨

Mornings early mist, hides faeries exist.

Circ'ling around ancient tall trees; 

magically appear with ease.

Gleefully singing, they're found winging

among dandelions blowing,

sweet wishes ~ fluffy heads flowing.

Children up at dawn, wishing on their lawn ...

 tiny faeries to discover.

Flowers hide them as they hover.

Keeping out of sight, tiny hands held tight.

Faeries stay behind tall grass blades,

afraid of early morning raids.

Never as it seems, only in ones dreams.

Flittering `round their faerie ring...

special mornings in early Spring.

Will not show their face, leaving not a trace!

Distant music calls all their names,

skipping 'way... playing faerie games.

Reviews

[Nima.Hope]

I was I the sky when I was reading g your beautiful poem dear Lisa. It's amazing. I felt I was a child, listening to my grandmother reading for me, while I was hanging out in fairy tales of my childhood.
All the best wishes,health and happiness for you dear Lisa.
Nima

[Lisasview]

I am so sorry to just now responding to your very lovely review, Nima... I broke my clavicle and then I broke three ribs so I was not able to type for awhile.
I am delighted you enjoyed my poem... I loved writing it!!
Lisa, still in Spain..It's Sunday..

[Nima.Hope]

Hi dear Lisa. I hope you get recovered as soon as possible. Wishing you all the best
Take care❤️

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Nima...

[Dianne S Penfold]

I love this! It is so delightful. I love faerie lore and this poem is simply magical. From the rhyming to the flow of the stanzas, it is such a well written piece.

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
I am delighted that you enjoyed it... Funny because I am in the process of changing it a bit..Hopefully by the end of next week.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Andrew2401]

And why shouldn't we believe. We have only scratched the surface our known world, let alone got to grips with the vastness of different and as yet unexplored worlds.

Liked this a lot.

Andrew2401

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Andrew for such a positive outlook regarding my Faeries poem.. Yes, why should we not believe..
Lisa, Sunday afternoon in Spain

[Akinlolu]

I believe that J.R.R. Tolkien might have loved this and possibly C S. Lewis. My grandma and all the children who grew up in the same season of my childhood and innocence would love it too. I wish you a recovery at the speed of light.
Akinlolu

[Lisasview]

So much better now...so I can thank you for your well wishes and for your lovely review!! So special..
Lisa, Sunday in Spain

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem dear Lisa.
"Children up at dawn, wishing on their lawn ...
tiny fairies to discover.
Flowers hide them as they hover."
The above lines. I did like. I like the rising moon. Seem to make the sky come alive. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote.

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Coyote for reading and reviewing my poem.
I am delighted to know you enjoyed it...
All my best to you,
Lisa, Sunday in Spain

[Lorry]

Reminds me of a story about Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, who was seen as barking mad for spending the last 30 years of his life believing in fairies and even hunting them, when it sounds fine, even quaint if we say he was a bit eccentric and followed his own path, or maybe it was the fairies path in life, which is what we all try to do. There's far worse things to be called and I doubt it harmed a single person what he believed. Maybe he would have proved their existence if we had been a bit nicer to him.
And is it really that weird anyway, when these days so many are convinced in so many weird things, like ufo's and let's not forget that a flat earth society still exists!
Believing what we believe is all that we need. Maybe fairies are even the real superheroes that didn't sell out to a franchise. 😊

[Lisasview]

Good morning Lorry,
I read your great review right after you sent it and I thought for sure I had responded... So strange... But at that time I was on heavy pain killers for my broken clavicle and 3 broken ribs so I was not my self..
Thank you so much for writing about believing!!
Lisa, on my computer early this morning, in Spain

[Lorry]

Ouchie Mcouch!
Hope you feel betterer soon. 🤕
Ps, a bump on head emoji will have to do, as I couldn't find one with your injuries 😊

[emmajoygreen]

'Gleefully singing, they're found winging
among dandelions blowing,
sweet wishes ~ fluffy heads flowing.'

When grown-ups (adults is too adult a word) stop seeing the joy of faeries and their hidden lives, they lose the delight and joy of that special hidden faerie world. The Child should lifelong remain in us, surely, says Em! What a wonderfully rhythmic faerie story you've laid before us, their secret forms of blossom and soil.. their ways, their fragility, their flower forms and touches of magic that only those sweet creatures have. I love this, am smiling.. today is already smiling at me. Thanks to you!

[Lisasview]

I am delighted that you like my Faerie poem.. Means a lot to me...
Lisa

[Betty Hermelee]

such an awesome treat for little ones desperately trying to find their faeries at dawn...but the faeries trick them and hide behind the flowers...perhaps they can hear them sing....but only in dreams....these are magical and little ones can pretend to actually be them.... they are alluring...and so is your piece Lisa with soft, smooth rhyme scheme...and the photo
Best, B

[Lisasview]

Good morning Betty,
Thank you so much for your sweet review. I really loved writing this one!!
Lisa, early morning in Spain

[Dave Brown]

I am not sure if guys are supposed to dwell too much on fairies but I have always had a soft spot
Much like Hummingbirds of fantasy and who does not love a happily hoovering Hummer
Probably the innocence of it all, no traffic jams or taxes to pay.
an enjoyable escape from a sometimes overwhelming reality
you have quite effectively added to their positive image with this piece

[Lisasview]

What a thoughtful review dearest Dave.. I thank you
so much for reading my little poem... Did you ever read my poem Nymph? I think you might like it.
Lisa
P.S.I believe men who are good poets have a sensitive side!!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

When I was little my sister and I had the flower fairy miniature books with beautiful pics of each fairy
Have you seen those
We would choose one to pretend to be

Love loved your write beautiful Lisa and the pic too x

Ps Books by cicely Mary barker

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much dearest Julie for your wonderful review... How wonderful that you grew up loving faeries... I think I know those books but I am going to look them up now...

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes they are beautiful as is your write Lisa !