Battlefield

Ah, yes, the forgotten love. The love never noticed.

they say love is a battlefield

and if it's trues

then you should know,

your winning

 

you started shooting

without knowing your aim

but i just took it

like the woman i am

 

we walk through these halls

everyday

but i'm invisible

you dont see

 

and i keep trying

to mend these veins

you keep opening

with every shot you make

 

but i am afraid

you will forever win,

my love,

on this bloodied, broken battlefield

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Ouch! Only an ignorant fool takes pot shots at an invisable target that they can't hope to understand. I feel the anguish and sense of hopelessness that eminates from these words.
I remember well the battlefield of the school halls and cafeteria. It could be come down right cruel and brutal at times.

But Time is the Key in this situation. A time moves, those who have internal strength carry on down the road of life, while those firing shots into ghosts simply stagnate and fade into oblivion.

Well writen; Full emotions that are identifiable with.

Infinity's Shadow

[Sean M. Addams]

very true piece love can be a battle field at times but if you find your true love you will feel at peace.... very cool piece...

[pebbz]

thanks jess. yeah i liked this a lot! it is not true though. we guys aren't that bad.

[jess]

SO TRUE! all the guys ive met....grrrr! it truly is a battlefield. i loved this one the best lol

[darkgurl]

Can sense the hurt in this well written write.