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I'm Done

I'm Done

A Poem by K. Carver
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A teenager who feels that there's no way out of her broken-hearted sorrow that these horrid people make her feel.

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you say this house is a home but its not...

you say im safe here but your lying...

it all feels more like a cage that im trapped in...

i feel like you put me here just to forget me...

you locked me up to throw away the key...

you dont care you just pretend to...

but what i really know is that you hate me...

 

well guess what...im done...

im done with your lies...

im done with your loathesome looks...

im done with your stories...

and im done with your bitterness...

but most of all...

im done with you!!

© 2009 K. Carver


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K. Carver
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really strong piece lots of emotion in this piece.... overall nice job ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


got it. ok. i liked it. srry i didnt rate none. i dont rate anything i review. i just dont think every1 nows wat bitterness or loathesome r. maybe if some1 asks u can explain.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Yes. Well. Not much to tell, so not much to read. I write poems, mostly. I'm breathing with life. I don't believe that I'm quite successful at either. I do ask one request of anyone who may read this:.. more..

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A Poem by K. Carver