Used

Used

A Poem by Britteny

Use me though I'm tired of being used

Those kisses aren't worth being abused

Everytime I see your face

You tear me from my saving grace

Swep me away with false wit and charm

Giving me nothing but fear and harm

You take my emotions and strip them bare

Though I'm over worked run me into the ground

Lead me to think lost emotions can be found

For using me never felt this good or could

Be as I had been told it would

© 2008 Britteny


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Britteny
Please ignore my spelling and grammar thanks!

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I loved this! Your emotions are a mixture between confusion, fear, and surrender. Your word choice was great and I loved the ending line. Fantastic work! = ]

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 7, 2008

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Britteny
Britteny

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My name is Britteny I am 30 years wise and I am finally back on writer's cafe! I have been a member of Writer's Cafe for somewhere around 12 odd years now. I am finally after a long disappearance p.. more..

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