life

when you just want to give up and life gets you down

Life hurts, it burns, it scares and what more. I just want to hide, I hate it here, what more can I say, what more can I do. I wish it wasn’t me, but it is me, I wish I wasn’t with them, but I am. I wish they would all die, no disappear.

I wish I wish I wish

My eyes hurt and sting from all the tears, my minds blank and scared from all my fears, I want to feel happy but I’m hurt. I want to feel loved not dead and alone.

I wish I wish they would all disappear.

Why can’t she leave me I want to be free I want to smile I want to be loved. Why do I always feel like dying is it because I’m living with them?

I wish I wish I wish

I was a million miles away, there are people I want to live with but it’s not possible. I just have to cry all night long wishing something bad happened to them all freeing me from there clutching jaws.

I wish I wish they would all disappear.

My tears roll as I write this poem trying to hide and not to hide what I’m trying to say. When my teacher reads this I hope she does not feel dismayed because I can’t open up to her ether.

I wish I wish I wish

I bang my head against the wall when will my suicidal thoughts end, grate I also have a trust issue so the depression and the lonely feeling goes on, I stand in the kitchen staring at knife .

No no no not now not ever.

I wish I wish they would all disappear.

Life hurts, it burns, it scares and what more. I just want to hide, I hate it here, what more can I say, what more can I do.

Good bye horrible world.

Author's Note

well my poems can be happy when I'm happy, but at the moment I am feeling depressed and lonely

Reviews

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

Powerful poem. I hope you feel much better now. This poem induces so much emotion. Don't ever stop writing.

[pams poems]

:) thank you i think i was feeling really depressed then, like really deep in depression im ok kind of lol

[Freesearch 101]

Very Intriguing!!!!Keep up the great work

[pams poems]

thank you :0

[wordman]

well i hope you feel better soon

[pams poems]

yh I guess im feeling a bit better

[wordman]

well thats good,now write a happy poem

[pams poems]

lol im not that happy

[wordman]

sure you are ,i made you smile

[pams poems]

but ill try

[Daisygirl]

I have a few pieces like that and I think it's really brave of you to share that. Well done!

[pams poems]

thank you for that :)