Stars

Stars

A Poem by Madness is Insanity

Star light, star bright
Shining strong, deep in the night

Star light, star bright
When dawn arrives, your out of sight

Star light, star bright
When sunset comes, your back in flight

Star light, star bright
Shining strong, deep in the night

© 2010 Madness is Insanity


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Madness is Insanity
I know its simple, is there anything I could add?

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This is a whimsical piece, sort of like a nursery rhyme. I like the whimsy and simplicity of it. I think that a couple more lines might beef it up a little...but I'm terrible when it comes to rhyme. :) Kudos to you.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the repeation of the first paragragh well done. You could maybe add
Star light Star bright
how I love to see you with all my might

thats just an idea though

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not really. The rhyming is a very simple, common sort of rhyming but I think you could be forgiven, because it is really a beautiful poem. Good work Xyl... I mean, Faeylii.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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