My Vanished Friend

that one friend

In my life of my own

i made a choice that led me to drown

I didn't expect this would be the result

to lose my friend outta my world

oh lord! let me undo my crime

i know she's a delicate mistress called time

People say me mean, i apologize for my deeds 

i didn't see all that coming

i should have known what i would be losing

I lost the person who stood for me

the one who was with me to be

from childhood till now i cry and bow

 

now you'r somebody i used to know

oh your ouch your feel i must say

must be the thing i got sensitive too

half a mile from you 

i could feel you coming

the things we did mistakes to bid

i wish i could do all that again

but now its all gone

mortality was right to be given to morons

so they could get one life to trial

eternity to complain and remember

i wish u were here

we could bear all our fears

am in my tears

now i miss your presence

i am sorry for my absence

i don't want this to be the end

come back to me

where'd you go My Vanish'd Friend

Author's Note

let me know what y'all think :)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"In my life of my own
i made a choice that led me( to ) drown"

[paras]

oops thanks for pointing out !! :) i'edit it and hope i get better by your such help ^^

[Sami Khalil]

:)..........................

[Khushi]

To lose a friend is like losing a limb. Feeling guilty after losing a friend is one of the worst emotions.

i don't want this to be the end
come back to me
where'd you go My Vanish'd Friend

Never too late to apologize. I wish u do get back your friend :)
Excellent work, very expressive.

[paras]

well all people do come back i hope for mine too lol
thanks .! :)

[Praveeta]

Lovely poem expressing innermost feelings.

[paras]

thanks alot ! :)

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"i wish u were here

we could bear all our fears

am in my tears




now i miss your presence

i am sorry for my absence"

A splendid read and write...Bravo....................

[paras]

thanks .!!! am glad you liked it:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Miles W.]

Very interesting poem. It defiantly captures the feelings someone might feel when facing something like this.

[paras]

thanks.!! i appreciate it that you found it interesting :)

[Radhika]

This poem has reminded me of a similar personal experience in life...if only 'the delicate mistress time could undo and bring back my vanished friend to me ! :(
Anyways good work ..keep it up

[paras]

thanks :) and i guess old memories still are powerful we should cherish them