To the one who called herself my mother.

To the one who called herself my mother.

A Poem by Patch Silver

I remember.
It started at dawn,
cool breezes turned to fire.
You made me,
then you kept me from you.
I remember.
The silent knife carvings,
up and down,
we screamed so loud that afternoon,
you hid in the washroom (draining).
I remember.
That slime the doctor pumped out of you,
where I came from,
but I was not a mess of pills.
I remember.
Your hands were once soft,
never to carry weapons,
scars now dripping down my back,
ten finger holds left me broken.
I remember.
I came home, and you were gone,
just gone,
my womb, my love, my home.
gone.
I remember.
The lengthy nights after,
the cold ones before,
the lullaby's madness, spinning cradles,
and here I am,
and I remember.

© 2012 Patch Silver


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They said the relationship between mother and child is so important in the formative years of a child. I think this is very true. I'm not really sure if this is the message you were trying to convey. But I think your poem is about dysfunctional relationships between a mother and a son, whatever may be reason that caused it to surface I prefer not to dig dipper. The poem is indeed tragic and sad and the emotion of the character is apparent. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patch Silver

11 Years Ago

First off, thank you!
This poem is indeed about my relationship with my mother (she was not th.. read more
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

You are such a busy person it took you three months to comment, haha anyway welcome back! And you ar.. read more



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this was sad tale... but beautifully written... keep up the good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


THat was so wonderful you should so read some of my new stories plz comment i love seeing what you think of my work i really do love this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Patch Silver

11 Years Ago

I would love to critique some of your writings! I promise that I will as soon as I get enough time t.. read more
They said the relationship between mother and child is so important in the formative years of a child. I think this is very true. I'm not really sure if this is the message you were trying to convey. But I think your poem is about dysfunctional relationships between a mother and a son, whatever may be reason that caused it to surface I prefer not to dig dipper. The poem is indeed tragic and sad and the emotion of the character is apparent. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patch Silver

11 Years Ago

First off, thank you!
This poem is indeed about my relationship with my mother (she was not th.. read more
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

You are such a busy person it took you three months to comment, haha anyway welcome back! And you ar.. read more
wow, so sad and abstract and filled with pain. A tragically lovely piece Patch, well done
God Bless

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patch Silver

11 Years Ago

I feel it to be a little bit more tragic than lovely. Lol
Thank you!

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