Getting closer

Getting closer

A Poem by Patricia
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Loving is like flying. You feel light and free and you need somewhere to fly to. You should fly to feel alive and to get closer to your aims.

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Sunlight on my skin, sunlight on my face.
Give me a reason not to give up my pace.
We have the time come lets fly real high.
Maybe tomorrow we're dead but flown in the sky.
Closer to the sun, closer to the moon.
I don't know where you are but I'll be there soon.

© 2014 Patricia


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It was an interesting piece that i too read with a smile.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing this too:) I'm happy to make you smile
this is cute indeed .. i like it, made me smile and yes especially the last two lines xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia

9 Years Ago

thanks for reading and reviewing:)
The last two lines make me smile. Nice imagery. Every line you`ve pen`d is depicting the colors of love. Well written!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia

9 Years Ago

Thank you, nice to hear:)

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Added on October 1, 2014
Last Updated on November 10, 2014
Tags: sun, moon, sky, you, me, high

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Patricia
Patricia

Germany



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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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