Falling

Falling

A Poem by Patricia
"

fallen for you

"
Falling in 
and out
of love

Not falling apart
But falling into
 
something different
and through

Fallen for much and many
For some and any

Look who I fall onto
It is love
And love comes with you

© 2015 Patricia


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I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like your work and content. The flow is not there for me. Another read and you may fine some little adjustments you can make. I would make a suggestion, but for this poem I am left empty of thought. Sorry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your honest comment! I propably will work on it, because also feel it is more like a r.. read more

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Added on December 15, 2015
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Patricia
Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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