If I told you

If I told you

A Poem by Patricia
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Maybe sometime, maybe never

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You would try to comfort me 
I know you, you would
This time I don't need to be loved
But I need to be understood

If we had this conversation
And I would try to explain
My words, my life, my thoughts, my heart
And you would end in pain

Your heart would break
My voice would shake
I know for sure
There is no cure

Not in my life 
I could tell you
Because if you'd tell me
I would break too

© 2015 Patricia


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You would try to comfort me
I know you, you would
This time I don't need to be loved
But I need to be understood
Love these lines
We really need to be understood more than to be loved sometimes.
Touching piece ☺

Posted 3 Years Ago


Patricia

3 Years Ago

Thank you alot! Its really sad sometimes when you are loved but not understood
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Yes indeed. I know this feeling only too well.
I love the title, it captures the readers attention. The poem is also very intriguing as nobody wants to hurt another.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you alot dear reader!
"but this time, i don't need to be loved but i need to be understood" love it! beautifully written piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
It is an allusion to the quote of george orwell! " Perhaps one did not w.. read more

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Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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