Collision

Collision

A Poem by Patricia
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When time and place collides there is nothing or everything. I love this illustration of the winternights where street lights illuminate the snow and you are somewhere exactly where you are.

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I am there 
I am nowhere

The sun shines in all the right places
It's the first time we were not alone in the same spaces
 


I am slight air
I am somewhere

The flickering snow is illuminated by the street lights
It was the instant when our souls touched through sights



The seconds didn't dare to stride ahead
The minutes didn't dare to stay instead

Everything was just abiding
It's the time our bodys were colliding

© 2014 Patricia


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Very cleaver rhyming. Though it isn't long, the way you crafted the sentences made me wonder where it was going. Very much enjoyed this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing:)

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Added on October 20, 2014
Last Updated on October 20, 2014
Tags: winter, night, snow, flickering, street lights, souls, collision

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Patricia
Patricia

Germany



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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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