Never asking

Never asking

A Poem by Patricia
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Are we deathless?

Everlasting?

Breathless!

Not contrasting.

Never asking.

© 2015 Patricia


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Short but the words are chosen so wisely for this piece. It is thought provoking and makes you think and wonder. Well written Patricia.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Patricia

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
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SKY
I enjoyed your lines they are small & beautiful with all meaning in them. Nice Work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Patricia

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
SKY

5 Years Ago

You're welcome my friend!
Very short and well pinned. Touches the philosophical question of our existence and existence in general. Is death necessarily none-existence? Do we live forever somehow? Glad I read this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Patricia

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your interesting thought to that!
Interesting poem. I like it. thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Patricia

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting

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Patricia
Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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