You do

You do

A Poem by Patricia
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This is my first love poem ever I think..

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Who needs sun
For the first time
I don't want to run

Who needs light
A glance in your eyes
I don't want to fight

Who needs air
I'd lose it anyways
I don't want the spare

For the first time
One does not worsen
You do make me
A better person

© 2015 Patricia


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Sweet and simple , a good write.

-Angad

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you for that nice comment
A very clever piece. Nicely written. 😊

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you my dear
hanir

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Would love to read more of your works.. 😊
Keep writing.
Patricia

8 Years Ago

How sweet of you! I definitely will
The first one is the unforgettable one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Patricia

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I am happy that you like it
Misery

8 Years Ago

You are welcome, dear poet.
Patricia a good rhyming poem from the heart I believe. I am pleased that you took a step forward and wrote a love poem. I like the last line "you do make me a better person" whomever can make you a better person in life is a good person themselves.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Patricia

8 Years Ago

Yes it is and thank you for your lovely comment

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Patricia
Patricia

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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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