Dear loved

Dear loved

A Poem by Patricia
"

Maybe the flow is not that great, but it sure comes from the heart.

"
There will be days
I will spend on the floor
Laying, chased instead of chase
With a mind thats sore

I do not think
I am not good enough
I do not blink
Because I do trust

I don’t want to bother
Even though you would
Happily, but I want another
Way for you to know, there should
For my demons to smother

Still happier that ever
Still going to burst
Dear loved, I want you never
To see me at my worst

© 2015 Patricia


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Really good progression through the piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you for noticing!
I really like the last stanza best. Overall I good free verse poem you have written Patricia.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! The best come from the heart I guess
Nice write!
Keep writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Patricia

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I will

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

130 Views
3 Reviews
Added on October 26, 2015
Last Updated on October 26, 2015

Author

Patricia
Patricia

Germany



About
My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

Writing
Falling Falling

A Poem by Patricia