infi..

there's an infinity

following me.

a universe where

i fight 

to be free.

there's an infinity

following me

Reviews

[...]

It's not following you, dude. It IS you. The "I" in I am.

[Siddhartha]

In Kafkaesque circles we move. Round, and round and round...

[Mockingbird]

sounds ominous. not the picture i have of infinity, unless it is eternal damnation. great job.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'there's an infinity
following m'e

and that horizon is never going to stop. you paint with a very fine brush and there's never any words out of place. fantastic.

[M Breen]

Yet there is an elegant light flight in the words of this awareness. The lightness of words striving for perfection of expression. Thanks for this.

[Ed Hart]

there's also one you're stepping on...you're already free in that one

[.]

~ so true... so very true... that's the one in which all of us are free to write...

[Ed Hart]

consider yourself hand cuffed

[Ed Hart]

hahahaha

[.]

~ never... hahahaha... :P

[.]

~ perfectly said, coach... i relate to this piece infinitely...