nowhere to go

nowhere to go

A Poem by paul

and this wet blanket is more
comfort
than many have ever 
known

like a bird who didn t  make it
on its first flight

and this strange muse
fooling 
us all
 
into believing
that something

that this dead end
is not dead

that that poem
can take you somewhere

when there really is nowhere to go
that we can get to

© 2010 paul


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You can go anyone, I like going somewhere quiet and peaceful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. i think it's a good thing that there truly is nowhere to go ... so why don't you stay and write some more ... there are many people left yet to find ... and there are many times more that you need to say ... "oh, here comes another one, now there's one more of us" ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


there is everywhere to go . . .

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is nowhere to go really..yet everyone is running here and there..everywhere..no one knows where?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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knowing more than you know, is not in a book, or in any words to come tipping through your mind...it's pure experience...we all have to wait on that

Posted 13 Years Ago


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