satiate

there's nothing i could eat to satiate

this hunger

no sky I could out high

to fly over

or under

Reviews

[em]

- ah!!! - this is intense - like walking into an inferno - that is exploding with profundity and melancholy - it makes the heart fly into and outside those unexplored crevices - and i agree with serah - it transcends all the boundaries of the universe -
- your genius is astounding - your poetry is exquisite - you, mister - are a rockstar!! -

[Isolophobe]

Terse, terse, terse. Complete.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Want never gets satiated..it just grows..the more you feed it.

[Crinkle°]

excellent.

[.]

. and coach ... i love, love, love the titles of your poems ...

the titles of your poems
are so perfect and apt
every time i read them
i am nearly zapped

[Robin]

this is a good hungry

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

soaring~ soaring high and higher~

[.]

. out high ? ... whoa !!! ... unmatched depth, profundity and passion ... excellence in poetic expression that transcends all the boundaries of the universe ... you rock, coach ... and how ... this is a bazooka ... sharp, cutting edge and lethal ...