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A Poem by paul

the deals i've made on the other side
of reality

sometimes reveal themselves.

madness claws at my brain
from the inside

© 2011 paul


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I know that feeling.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Realistic ! feels as if one has gone through the same path at times.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! Outstanding description. I too, have made those deals...I totally feel this.
Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Kind of like borrowing money you know you can't pay back? Now that would be a deal one would make on the other side of reality. Excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


luscious dark candy for the mindscapes~ being me I find this gorgeous terrain to explore further~

Posted 13 Years Ago


No matter how much shots we try to escape our "other side realities" ...sometimes in our life we confront our past cimmerian shades of life...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Clichéd it may sound but there is divinity in brevity...this lovely piece of work proves that perfectly...Oh...the fight, the turbulence and the perilous balance of scales...

Posted 13 Years Ago


some people fail at encapsulating an infinity in brevity, this clearly succeeds at doing so. horrifies too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


mmm, the antagonism of life...nicely conveyed :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


it's irresistible isn't it?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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